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Friday, June 02, 2006

Philosophical Conundrum? (a perspectives bleg)

Friedrich Hayek’s social justice is described as individuals acting in concert to achieve justice for the state. Here, the two senses in which social justice is "social" are (1) individuals interact with one another to inspire and engage in acts of justice, and (2) the justice to be achieved is not for the benefit of any one actor, but of the state, writ large.

Harry Brighouse’s conception of social justice focuses instead on the state acting in such fashion as to develop in individuals the skills and knowledge necessary for them to develop into autonomous individuals, capable of choosing from among a variety of possibilities the life that they choose and enabling them to flourish within that life. Social justice further requires that the choices available be independent of preexisting conditions over which the child has had no control, such as family history, socioeconomic background, or racial and cultural heritage.

Are these conceptions as at-odds with one another as they appear at first blush? Can both of them be pursued in public education? Should they?

Wednesday, May 31, 2006

Remember High School?

Try this quiz...for fun. I'm not tellin' what I scored!

Monday, May 15, 2006

Education for Citizenship

Today the BBC reports on deliberations within the UK government over whether to make compulsory the teaching of "core British values" to 11 - 16 year-olds. This in response to the July 2005 London Bombings.

The six month-long schools review will ask how all children can develop a
strong sense of British identity by learning about Britain's culture and
traditions, including the contributions from different communities.

The UK is multicultural but there needs to be a debate about the things
shared by all communities, which bind society together, [Education minister
Bill Rammell] added.

Harry Brighouse tackles the issue of citizenship education in his latest book. His support for citizenship education is based on the benefits that such education has for students developing into autonomous adults, applying that knowledge to pursuing their own flourishing and not merely for the benefit of the society in which they navigate. (Brighouse distinguishes between citizenship education and education for patriotism).

Friday, May 12, 2006

MSNBC.com Article: No state meets teacher quality goal set by Bush

Not a single state will have a highly qualified teacher in every core class this school year as promised by President Bush's education law. Nine states face penalties.

Cart Before the Horse (or Data-Missing Decision-Making)

Found this article on MSN's homepage today. It describes an experiment in a Rochester, Minnesota elementary school classroom that has traded traditional desks and chairs in favor of a more free-flowing environment. The two-fold purpose is (1.) to examine the effects of more movement in the classroom on obesity, and (2.) to examine the effects on student learning. Both of these, to be sure, are worthy enough goals, but the following excerpts most dramatically caught my attention, as they speak to a pervasive problem in educational innovation, that of diving headlong into untested, unproven strategies:

The data aren't in yet. But anecdotally, Rynearson and Superintendent Jerry Williams say the fourth- and fifth-graders are more focused on the curriculum than their peers in a comparison group in an ordinary classroom.

Williams, the superintendent, has already been converted to the new concept and thinks it could be expanded, with or without the computers and iPods. "I would love to have this move from a single classroom to the whole school," he said.


I am completely in favor of innovation and experimentation in the classroom as a means to improve the educational experience for our students, but Williams' position seems a bit premature.

Thursday, May 11, 2006

On Expectations (or Locus of Control)

Richard Feynman was a preeminent theoretical physicist of the 20th century. He was recruited as a young man to work on the Manhattan Project, helping to develop the atomic bomb in Los Alamos. Later, he developed his theory of quantum electrodynamics, an adventure for which he shared the Nobel Prize in Physics. It was Feynman who, with a simplicity that was classic Feynman, solved the puzzle of the cause of the Space Shuttle Challenger disaster. Richard Feynman was regarded in his time as a genius. He still is.

Genius” is an accolade imposed upon certain people from without. Often it is a heavy burden upon the individual. This was true of Richard Feynman. After World War II he was offered a job at Princeton’s Institute for Advanced Study. He turned it down to work instead with Hans Bethe at Cornell University, where he felt he would be free to resume the work he loved in physics and mathematics, unencumbered by the expectations of others.
They [must have] expected me to be wonderful to offer me a job like this and I
wasn’t wonderful, and therefore I realized a new principle, which was that I’m
not responsible for what other people think I am able to do; I don’t have to be
good because they think I’m going to be good. And somehow or other I could relax about this, and I thought to myself, I haven’t done anything important and I’m
never going to do anything important. But I used to enjoy physics and mathematical things and because I used to play with them it was in very short
order [that I] worked the things out for which I later won the Nobel Prize.
It was out of the freedom from externally imposed expectations that Feynman was able to accomplish some of the greatest works of his genius. But before he could free himself of the artificially imposed chains of others, he had to loose those of his own expectations. When he had done so, he won the Nobel Prize by doing what he loved.

Charter Schools and Social Entrepreneurship

Introduction
“The report of my death has been greatly exaggerated,” quipped Mark Twain in response to a newspaper reporter’s 1896 inquiry about a rumor that Twain was either dead or on his deathbed. So it may be said of alternative education in the United States. By 1975 the alternative education movement, born of the humanistic “counterculture” revolution of the 1960’s, was deemed to have met with the same dismal fate as had its stimulus. Unable to harmonize humanistic innovations with important educational goals, pressured by a threatened educational establishment, and eroded by inconsistent and insufficient funds, support for alternative schools diminished (Deal, 1975). Yet, though battered and bruised through their first decade, and conscious of the possibility for their misuse, alternative schools remained a promising laboratory for testing and evaluating bold strategies of educational reform (Barr, 1981).

Today, alternative education, including the charter school movement, holds a valuable position within the wider construct of school choice. In an increasingly pluralistic America, where nearly one million students drop out each year, schools are faced with immense pressure to cope with ever increasing diversity. It is no longer enough that schools serve as a proving ground for academic excellence. The society they once served well no longer exists. Startling, revolutionary technical advances have sufficiently diminished the demand for unskilled/moderately-skilled workers, leaving those who drop out, as well as those American businesses that must absorb the costs of sufficiently educating and training them, at an increasingly difficult disadvantage (Mottaz, 2002).

Increasingly citing an ossification of lumberingly bureaucratic, centralized school districts, built upon what Foster and Kaplan have termed an “invisible architecture” (2003), resistant to any fundamental change that threatens the status quo, calls are becoming louder for a complete restructuring of American public education. These provocative suggestions demand dramatic shifts in the power structures within public education, including appealing to the open-sector with teacher dominated professional partnerships and teacher owned schools. Charter schools provide a unique opportunity for interested parties, including students, parents, teachers, and community leaders, to have a more relevant voice and greater autonomy in developing and operating effective public schools, while increasing accountability for student and fiscal performance (Dirkswager, 2002; Newell & Buchen, 2004).

Charter Schools Defined
A charter school is a public, nonsectarian, tuition free school of choice. Its students take state tests required of other (non-charter) public school children. Charter schools may not discriminate in admissions, programs, or activities. A charter school is not any particular teaching or learning model. More properly, a charter school is an “empty” administrative structure into which creative, entrepreneurial people put some kind of different, more effective learning program. Charter school law frees such schools from many of the regulatory and procedural constraints of school districts. In return for this freedom charter schools are held to higher standards of accountability for student success. A charter school that does not perform may be closed by its sponsor.

A charter is a contract between the school and its sponsor, or authorizing agent. With the exception of the City of Milwaukee, the University of Wisconsin-Milwaukee, Milwaukee Area Technical College, and the Milwaukee School Board, each of which is allowed to authorize charter schools located within the Milwaukee School District, and the University of Wisconsin-Parkside, which may authorize one charter school, Wisconsin state law allows only local school boards to authorize charter schools. There is no limit on the number of charter schools a school board may authorize. Each charter school may serve not only those students residing within the local district, but may also attract students from other districts via Wisconsin’s open enrollment legislation. The terms of the charter may not exceed five years and the charter is renewable. Charter school teachers must be licensed by the Wisconsin Department of Public Instruction.

Opportunities for Social Entrepreneurship
Wisconsin charter school law, §118.40(7)(a), distinguishes between charter schools that operate as instrumentalities of their local school board and those that do not (non-instrumentality). Most charter schools operate as instrumentalities of, and legally remain part of and subject to, the policies and budgetary considerations of the authorizing school district. The authorizing school board employs the charter school personnel. The option of operating a charter school that is not an instrumentality of a school district and is instead that of another entity provides exciting opportunities for entrepreneurial teachers and socially minded agencies.

School boards may authorize a charter school and then contract, either directly or via an agency of which the charter school would be an instrumentality, with a Teacher Professional Partnership (TPP). A TPP is a cooperative of teacher-owners “working together in an interdependent, collaborative way to maximize their professional roles” (Dirkswager, 2002). It is a business entity, the bottom line of which is student learning and success. Teacher ownership recognizes the professional status and expertise of teachers and gives them the same latitude to practice their trade as can other professionals, including lawyers, doctors, and accountants. The non-instrumentality arrangement disentangles the teachers from district policy and the protections and restrictions of the bargaining agreement. Such an arrangement encourages talented teachers to implement diverse, creative, and innovative teaching strategies to affect student outcomes, and rewards the charter school with continued existence only when success is demonstrated.

Conclusion
Far from come-and-gone, alternative education remains a vibrant and vital component of American public education. As Mark Twain refused to be counted out before his time, so has alternative education. Recognizing its potential to function as a breeding ground for innovative practice, the charter school movement continues to inform strategies of best practice in the education of diverse groups of students. Wisconsin charter school legislation provides an exciting forum for interested social entrepreneurs to improve the American system of public education for its millions of diverse students.